All Comments on 'Gratitude Times Three'

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Try not using stupid slang that adults don't use in highly excited situations. It sounds silly on the ear.

Try reducing the number of exclamation points to less than 1/8 of all the sentences. Otherwise you come off as overly dramatic.

That would go a long way toward NOT sounding like a used car or wonder cleaner commercial.

Stories about the wife's boss are very usual, but at least in this one there are respect and all done in due agreement. What I don't agree is with the boss (this or anyone that fucks one or more of their personel...), because a boss that does this will loose the power that a boss must have over his employees. A boss that does this is in the hands of those employees for any kind of blackmail...However 3*

finally a story of a wife in a threesome I can understand and accept

Being new to this site I am surprised at the comments/discussion caused by this particular story. Either the Anonymous individuals really didn't care for it, or they simply enjoy giving less than constructive comments for those trying to provide some reading done by novice writers.

But I appreciate all those who did take the time to read it.

As Chuck Yeager wrote, "1. Never sweat the small stuff. 2.Unless it's life threatening, everything is small stuff."

Same old silly plot. No one allows their boss to come to their home and screw their wife.

Great story, everyone happy, no nastiness, no implausible penis the size of a baseball bat, well done.