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by Stud9631

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh stud, this is so boring.

There is no build up to the sex - open the door and get naked and then jerk off?

And you need a better editor. Just a quick look and i found these errors -

She place (=placed) her mug

I must of (=have) shot like 12 loads

gordo12gordo12over 9 years ago
Agreed it's boring

Typical porn script. Girl sees guy and is so overcome she drops to her knees and sucks his cock. Yeah right!

Life just isn't like that but a lot of VERY YOUNG guys just don't understand that yet. Their minds are addled by watching too much unrealistic porn.

Your story is on that level.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Written by a 14 year old maybe? How could someone make this boy's own fantasy sound so boring?

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