by bassbelly
As usual, it is an excellent story. I have trouble relating to someone who is unbelievably rich, but that's MY problem. Still, I am surprised that Marina's father would leave his vineyard so easily, even for riches. It probably had been in the family for many generations.
It was a great writing, keep up the good work, one of the better ones here of late
Very very nice - unrealistic but very emotional and romantic - rich man, beautiful woman, very romantic, nice emotions - one of several good stories from this writer - keep up the good work.
Well, it WAS quite good - until it got to the last three lines!
You apparently then ran out of ideas and so it got totally 'rushed'!