by cashcrunch
I chuckled all the way through. That said, you should move this to the fantasy section.
Nice to see Greg returned from his Road Trip with a taste for black women, especially when they're as luscious as this. I also like the subtle role-reversal, as the fully-in-control Adena plays submissive slut for him. A great contribution to the still underpopulated white male/black female category. More please!
THIS STORY WAS SO GREAT; PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY. YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations to a really wonderful story.
The build-up is amazing, the introduction of the characters and the situation is simply A+++.
The act itself I find a little to fantastic, although it is not taking any credit away from the writer.
Keep it up, love to read more from you in the future.
alphata
NOTHING NEW BUT YOUR USE OF "OFF OF" SHOWS YOUR LACK OF REAL ENGLISH GRAMMAR.
I love how the detail of the two horny figures blended in. Comparing to other stories I have read, I have NEVER got this horny before! The juice from my pussy came and came like waterfall. Can't wait to see whom opened the door c;