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*Quinn*
I can feel Galen's strong arms around me as the heart attack takes hold of me. I thought I would feel fear but I have none. It is painful at first but soon the pain is gone, I open my clenched eyes to find that I am no longer in our shared apartment. Everything is so bright and the first thing I see is Galen's face full of love looking down at me. I look down at myself and find that I am young again. I feel Galen's arms and wings envelop me and I know that I am in heaven.
I am at peace.
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The End
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoJust finish your story and have tears in my eyes! I loved it! You have a true God given talent! I will reread this one over and over again! Thank you!
Anonymousover 8 years agoI would like to ask your permission to rewirte this as a love story, taking out the sexual parts and making this a actual story.
Scoobydoo2014about 9 years agoAbsolutely loved this, a definite favourite. Only thing is I would liked to have read about how his life turned out, what he did after high school, did he take up art, what kind of life did they have, what did Galen do. A little rushed at the end. However, this was a beautiful beautiful story. Not crying😥😢, hay fever..
Anonymousover 10 years agoI would of liked to hear more about how he grew as a person, and I was just waiting to read that because of Galen his stutter stopped. That would of been have been a tear wrenching accomplishment.
I really liked the whole series, I enjoyed hearing about angels and all the little details about the wings really sparked my interested and I just had to keep reading.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoNicely done but i think i would have liked to see some of Quinn's accomplishments too.
