by flyingfish33
If I had come across this in another category I'd rate it at all otherwise; no score.
Looking at scores in this category they reflect the writing ability of the author as much as author's logic in category placement...
Just looking at the average scores and, reviews...
Well done as usual. I am really enjoying this series. The progression or the characters into swinging works. Don't listen to the one guy that posted five times. Loving Wives can have swinging stories as well. Keep up the good writing.
At least you got out of second person. You got that going for you, story still sucks though.
Dude....your writing skills are amazing. I could actually picture each and everything. The build up was so hot. It wasn't the usual gangbang but a perfectly crafted story with a game to excite things. Keep writing such masterpieces