All Comments on 'Guys Next Door Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Grade the story,

Not the category. LAME comment, stupid grade.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Maybe

If I had come across this in another category I'd rate it at all otherwise; no score.

Looking at scores in this category they reflect the writing ability of the author as much as author's logic in category placement...

Just looking at the average scores and, reviews...

NotthedroidyouarelookingforNotthedroidyouarelookingforalmost 6 years ago
Hot Story

Well done as usual. I am really enjoying this series. The progression or the characters into swinging works. Don't listen to the one guy that posted five times. Loving Wives can have swinging stories as well. Keep up the good writing.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
At least

At least you got out of second person. You got that going for you, story still sucks though.

270498270498over 2 years ago

Dude....your writing skills are amazing. I could actually picture each and everything. The build up was so hot. It wasn't the usual gangbang but a perfectly crafted story with a game to excite things. Keep writing such masterpieces

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