All Comments on 'Gwen Pt. 01'

Get a proof-reader, get an editor, learn to write, and actually spend some time with the LBGT community before writing about them. 1 star

All the misspellings, incorrect word choices and typos almost turned me away from this story. I hung in there hoping that it would be worth it. but in spite of a fairly promising start it left us in a lurch for the next chapter that never came. I assume the writers ego was crushed and he went away like so many in this format have before him. Our loss,..