All Comments on 'Hades Ch. 01'

I do hope you will continue with the next chapter(s) as fast as you can. I am very curious as to what will happen :) Goodluck!

Please continue with this story! Looking forward to reading more about it. Thanks!

I adore stories about the Greek gods. I am looking forward to reading some more.

I can't wait to read more!!

Greek Mythology is ALWAYS a good topic. Don't feel hesitant to really take time to develop your characters and setting. In erotic fiction, lots of physical details are always enticing, even if there is no sex. I'm awaiting the next chapter.

it just seemed a little rushed. Stories on this site that involve mythologies, (especially greek) have devoted fans, so don't be afraid to take the time to slow it down and further develop everything. Also, I'd advise (from personal experience) that you get an editor to help with punctuation.

great start! i love mythology and was excited to find one about Hades and Persephone. as mentioned before, dont be afraid to draw it out and develop the story.

I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

More please!

I wonder if the baby survived as well? Can't wait to find out what Hades is going to do to Demeter

Something new I can sink my teeth into!!!!I agree with wolfgirl13,this is awesome.Dont agree with bigcoreSKR.....this pace is just the right pace for the discerning reader!!!!

And you continued this trend by regularly mixing up tenses and plurals. Why is it that there appear to be so many people with good ideas and a willingness to contribute to this site who cant write for shit and wont take it on themselves to get an editor?

I'm such a horrible writer. I'll try better next time. :)

This is really good. I never read a story about the geek gods except back in high school. This is a cool story. I am so reading this.

Should've been called "Hades Epic Road Trip to Find and Rescue his Wife".