All Comments on 'Hailey's Story'

But it is a non con story.

Look forward to the next ( longer) chapter

Hi!

this is a nice non-con story, i hope to read more of it very soon!!!

Hi,

A good start to a promising non-consent story. I look forward to many more chapters

You have a lot of talent, xckid77, but you should pay more attention to your presentation. Read everything through and don't rely on spell-checkers. This should also have been in Non-Consent, but for a newcomer, that is pardonable!

Well done - I look forward to reading much more. Five stars and welcome to Literotica.

This is a nonconsent story and does not belong in this category. Maybe it will after she is abused and given several rounds with the bitch's magical twat, turning her into a mindless sex doll. So, please move it to noncon, or maybe the saphotic love section.

This has the makings of a good story, but it definitely belongs in the non--consent category.

But really should be in non consent.

I enjoyed reading it though, and would certainly read more chapters.

Well done and have 5 stars to encourage you!

Please make more I would love to keep reading

I loved this start! Can't wait to know how she's going to train her! Please keep writing!

It seemed like the word "sweetie" was said every two words. The story got really annoying real fast.

Excellent start. Am very interested to read how Hailey progresses.

Excellent -- really erotic so far.