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Click here"She won a 'cademy award, you know."
"I know. I was there and saw her get it. She got two of them."
"Daddy was, too."
"Yes, and your Mommy. We all went to see her. It was wonderful. So anyway, Daddy and Chloe taught me to skate and for the first time in a very long time, I didn't feel alone any more. I found out your Daddy was my brother. He made me feel safe and loved because he cared for me, just as you must care for each other. It's very important. Maybe, the most important thing in the world." She stood up. "Come on. Let's see your Mommy and Daddy."
She walked toward the couple standing together, arms around each other, smiling at the three coming towards them with Elaine holding the two tiny hands.
"Matthew, Dianne. It's so good to see you again," Elaine said. She hugged them both, fiercely.
"Elaine. I see you found our two little munchkins."
"They found me really. I was just walking in the snow, enjoying the lights."
"Daddy, Aunt Elaine knows Chloe, too."
"Yes, she does. We're all very close."
"Can we go skating now? I want to go skating. Come on, Aunt Elaine. Come skate with us."
"I still have to put my skates on, honey. Why don't you skate with your brother a few minutes while I talk to your Daddy? I'll be there soon, I promise." They ducked under the rail and started skating, more walking than skating, hardly moving.
"They remind me of myself when I was learning to skate," Elaine said.
"Stay close to us, now," Dianne warned. "Don't leave our sight."
"Okay, Mommy."
"So," Matt said. "Finally. Rockefeller Center. You made it after all these years."
"Well, it was always on my bucket list. One of many things I have to do in New York."
"How do you like the tree?"
"It's spectacular. They did a wonderful job this year."
"We've already got tickets for a Broadway play," Dianne said. "You'll never believe it. They made a play out of Chloe's screenplay. That's the show we're going to."
"Does she....?" Looking pointedly at Dianne.
"Know that the play's about us. Oh, yes. Chloe screened her before we got serious. She made a good choice. I don't keep any secrets from her. She's an extraordinary woman."
Dianne nudged Elaine's arm. "Wasn't he a handsome stud when he was younger?"
"Oh, yes, quite the stud. He's still handsome, although I can no longer speak to the stud part."
"He's still got it, Elaine. He still gets my juices flowing."
Elaine laughed. "I guess I'll have to take your word for it."
"Could you quit talking about me like I'm not here. For God's sake."
"I was just telling the children how we met after so many years. How I was lost and then I was found and finally saved."
"It's a good story, isn't it. No wonder Chloe won an academy award, acting and original screenplay," Dianne said.
"Best story in the whole world, as far as I'm concerned."
"Amen," Matt agreed.
"I'd better put my skates on, show them how it's done."
- COMMENTS
MurseD2 months agoGreat story, very well written with a great buildup. I agree with a couple others on here about not spoiling at it the beginning, IMO would have been a better shock/twist to find out like they did. But still, very well done.
JimDiamond2 months agoLoved the story but was a bit surprised by the ending. The parent discounting the sexual abuse is not unusual. As deeply involved as they had become I do have very real doubts about the real relationship they had created just suddenly stopping with real live people. I can certainly believe that they would have separated eventually into other relationships, but that would have evolved. Of course that is just an opinion based on very personal experience, and a bit of actual research back when I was a Social Psychologist in the area...:-)
Anonymous3 months agoGREAT story.
Just wish you could have not spoiled the incest angle in the beginning.
Maybe put it in "Erotic Couplings"and said "Oh - and there are some other tags, too..."
albertaboy3 months agoI really enjoyed this story, took a long time to get into the genre but you handled it really well.
five stars
ToughSailor4 months agoAbsolutely Beautiful piece of writing. Especially loved Ella's persona. Blunt-straight forward and honest As for the story content, I couldn't agree with Reddog222's comments more. You have now become one of my favored authors. Thank you.
Anonymous11 months agoA touching story. Interesting for sure because of the content. I'm not sure I've ever read anything like it. Thanks.
Reddog22212 months agoAs others stated prior, This was a more realistic portrayal of the incest/runaway crisis in society. The later relationship between Matt and Elaine was incidental and was not played up for erotic consumption. I Applaud!
Anonymousabout 1 year agoThis story only has accidental incest, and and reveals a past horrible criminal-rape incest, yet, it also includes good sex, love, and character arcs. This seems intended as a genre-buster, and not a bad one at that.
Any attempt to deal with consensual incest, say in maturing past it, or growing out of it, or making realistic long-term decisions, you know, development that brings the characters in line with society, is thrown out the window. Remember, not only is incest gross, but the lead female was incest-raped previously.
Of course, facing the future together in the difficult and unapproved relationship is also never possible. None of the possible struggles or triumphs (if you use that term) of those consensually involved in incest are explored.
Bringing in Dianne from out of nowhere is the last straw that shows that this story is 100% written to repudiate the genre. Our MC's happily-ever-after comes from a wife-ex-machina. Dianne has no development, no relation to the story, she is just there at the end for our hero to have a lover/ wife that is not his sister or his lesbian friend.
There is no growth, within the frame of the story, concerning the category title. It almost does not belong.
Is repudiating the genre bad? This is a bit like the LW category with the tussles between the swinger-adjacent, the RAAC crowd, and the BTB crowd.
Anyway, this is a good story, with the horrible criminal side of incest exposed and dealt with, and the little sister protected. The main cast strive towards something good, or towards virtue of some sort mostly throughout.
Well-written Five for you
Anonymousabout 1 year agoWow, and I almost passed on this story because it’s 10 pages. I do have a short attention span tho. I gave it two pages and I was hooked. Not necessarily by the story but by the writing. Mr. Fist, you’ve got some mad skills, sir! I’m going to be checking out your catalog of soon. Probably won’t start with that 60-odd chapter story, I’ll have to work my way up to that one. Thanks for the great entertainment. Five stars, wish I could give it ten.
