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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice story but wrong category, Erotic Coupling not Romance.

Erotic Coupling is defined as 'wild one-on- one consensual sex' This story fits that perfectly, and is a very good example. However Romance is defined as 'Drama, love, risk and happy-ever afters. I expect romance to tell the story of the development of a relationship, possibly through ups and downs etc. These elements are not present in this story. 5 stars as erotic coupling but not as a romance.

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