All Comments on 'Hannah's Good Vibrations'

I loved this! Very well written, and extremely erotic and arousing--

Excellent erotic action. Good imagination from someone claiming to be "shy girl no-one would expect it from". A few minor typos; not seriously distracting. Some plot discontinuities. (When did she put her panties and bra on?)

and hot as hell. Sensual and erotic all rolled into one. Great job.

Fantastic story. I enjoyed it a lot.

Might want to check some of the typos, like "colour bone", but really very good.

Fantastic submission. A few typos and teeny plot issues, as some other people have already noted. But they didn't detract from the story, which was erotic, sweet, and believable. Great story; keep it coming!!