All Comments on 'Hanson House Ch. 18'

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

OMG! Get an editor!

Reduce this to 4 or 5 good chapters and lose the rest of this worthless garbage. Way, way, way too long. You ran out of ideas chapters ago. Bad.

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

Do you have any idea how this promotes brainwashing and increases the chances of crime against women.

You should be ashamed of yourself.

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