All Comments on 'Happy Anniversary Dear'

I loved this one due to the long and cruel joke that would have most people on their knees praying to God by then for mercy.

An enjoyable story with pretty good dialogue. The twist at the end made it all worthwhile.

Thanks,very good story, loved the ending.

Great twist at the end!

One of your best efforts! Please continue writing on a regular basis.

Boyd

A great read with a thriller of a story line.

This has just the tone I would like to see

in more of the Loving Wives tales. Of course,

she was terribly stupid to allow things to get

where they did but then there would be no story

if she talked things out before the event!

it really isnt the story you started with. At the very least he could have took her into the party and announced they were separated. She needed a shock to her system to tell her that her actions and behavior were not acceptable. A very silly twisted scene ending, sorry but I dont like being set up any better than she did! Even with the scene coming out as described by the author, I could never have trusted her again. And it isnt worth watching your and her back 24/7/365 no matter how much you might think you love her.

You have been missed as you are one of the very best "cheating wives" authors at the site. This was a cute tale. Only one tiny nit pick - Carla went to the ladies room and never came out. Please don't stay away so long.

Thanks for another great read. PAPATOAD

other than i loved the ending. it came as a very nice surprise. now that you've started, keep up the good work. a fan always.

This was a great story with a very surprising ending. You have done a masterful job of writing a very complete story in a short and concise way. I visualized this story from start to finish. It was a great read and really good entertainment.<P> You have to stop over thinking if a story is good enough and post the dang thing! This was done so well and just so enjoyable. Thank you for your great effort.<P>PT

I have read your stories in the past and enjoyed them immensely. Keep up the good work.

For someone who is poor at finishing stories, you sure came up with a fantastic end to THIS story! Keep writing!

This is an interesting story and a fun read. Thank you Cageytee. RAG

Totally contrived, irrational, illogical, and the surprise ending makes the whole thing seem like he doesn't care if she cheats or not.

Granted, the plan that Jess came up with wasn't the smartest thing in the world, but she *was* meeting Billy in a very public place (as opposed to a hotel room, which would have been really inexcusable), and obviously (taking into account her side of the story as well) she loves him a lot and would never cheat on him. Especially since he had found out from Gord & Carla what the plan was, I think that Harry's behavior was definitely a bit too mean. Why does he "need to teach her a lesson"? If he thinks that they should have a conversation about acceptable behavior/trust (again, keeping in mind that she was going to tell him what had/was going to happen), I hardly think that embarrassing her publicly is the best way to get the message across. (And remember also that this is the *second* time that he's embarrassed her in public w/o reason...) I think that from these two episodes, he sounds like a really controlling husband with trust issues.

To the previous poster who claimed that you "could never trust her again" - given that the story tells you *both* sides of the story, do you think it would have been fair for him to divorce her? I'm not saying that it's not *understandable* - like I mentioned in the beginning, her plan was a pretty stupid one - but how horrible would it have been if their marriage ended on a misunderstanding (and not a betrayal)? The fact that Harry threatens her with such an ending is another reason why I think that his behavior crossed the line. If my husband did something like this to me, I would have a very difficult time trusting *him*.

I felt thae ending was too contrived. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad the truth came out and she wasn't cheating on her husband, but he is a bigger ass than Coombs. Lets face it, he is condescending, arrogant and gets his excercise from jumping to conclusions. She would do well to divorce his ass and show him that she doesn't need his help to run her life.

nothing contrived at all. he made use of all the cercumstances that he was in and his surprise is indeed a surprise. and he did show that he does trust her, well, in the end.

Loved the twist at the end!

You always write well, but it's hard to enjoy a story in which both husband and wife are total idiots,Dumbo husband decides the appropriate time to celerate an anniversary is three days after the anniversary. He is right, he has "feeble and Traditional mind", even if it is not traditional anywhere that I know of. Then dumbo wife decides to have lunch with company letcher so she can embarrass him in front of the entire restauant by kicking him in the groin or some other humiliating punishment. Unfortuneatly she confides in best friend who turns out to be a traitorous non friend and tips off husband to the whole scheme so feeble minded husband can embarrass her. They deserve each other. Two idiots . The only real difference is they he has faithful friends, she does not

60 year old George

The plot will well delivered and the characters strong and clearly defined. THAT is also the problem.

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what makes this story difficult to like is that BOTH of them have been thru cheating episodes before. WHY would she decide her ego and hiding her misjudgements about the pussy hound is MORE important than concedding the point to her husband? It IS their 10th anniversary. It should NOT be a big deal to say "sorry your were right"

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and the husbands plan is so over the top I cannot even begin to see how this works. Are they both going to look back in their old age and say to each other ..."remember that time dear when you almost divorced me b/c I could not admit I was wrong when I let that pussy hound get too close?..."

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come on folks....

Author - I was entertained by your quite good work. <P>

Those that didn't were preoccupied by presumption - they don't understand that a story must have an underpinning of unmindful variance that reflects the people factor.<P>

That being the substantiated fact that occasionally the most intelligent person can sometimes do the most stupid things without any consideration of how it will be perceived or the consequences of fallout.<P>

Take Harry for example. Of late he has shown flashes of careful intelligent consideration. Occasionally, he shows signs of understanding that a story must be based on something worth writing about. Sometimes he falls ill with the far fetched and righteously so. <P>

However, a lot of the time he fails to use his intellect and instead becomes an example of said human factor. We know he can spell as he sometimes does but often the frothing slobber of forced intended righteousness must cloud his mind and screen. I am proud of him when he uses re-examination and correct spelling and when he isn't trying to be the first with the his unassailable dictum's of logic. Relax Harry.<P>

Author - I liked it and the talent plus imagination displayed. I think most will and you should be satisfied with that. So smile !!!<P>

With Very High Regard

I thought this story was quite engaging, the finish wasn't exactly perfect but close. Thoroughly enjoyable story overall. Bravo

the story is still rather silly. <p>

as a grown up, these mis-perceived-oh-ah-wink-wink stories, when not done exceptionally comical, or well constructed and executed (through the dialogues) ----- they are just NOT very funny or good. <p>

frankly, this flopped big time. it dont' work, sorry.

And as a bonus, I'm back to disagreeing with Harry as usual (guess yesterday was an aberration). Seriously, this is a great story - the set up and changing perspectives is masterful. I did not see the twist coming at the end - put a big smile on my face - well done, KGT.

It's rather late, and the negative reviews -- the ones that got it right -- have already said pretty much what I wanted to say.

Good story, what is everyone complaining about?

It was a light hearted story with a twist for an ending. Y'all are reading more into it than was intended. Thanks

I did like the ending. But his wife should not have been so stupid and the problem is she would have kicked him out while we dont know but I dont know if he really would have kicked her out.

<p>I wasn't at first too happy with the ending. It seemed, kinda Pat. But once I sat and thought about it, it seemed like the perfect lesson to pull on someone who keep doing dangerous things, but won't listen.</p>

<p>To me the wife, while innocent, was playing with fire but was pretty arrogant in thinking that nothing could happen. Her character seemed to think that being flattered by someone who obviously didn't care about breaking up marriages. That her ego was more important than her husbands peace of mind. That's how date rape drugs get used. But the husband decided a new way to make her sweat out the bad decision, and then found a way to make her regret the decision. It was kinda funny to me in the end though =)</p>

-Risq

A fun story. Nothing deep or weird. Just a good read.

The writing was good (except when you had Jess engrave the watch "Love, Jenny" - oops), but the characters came across as being in high school. The "girls" heard the gossip at the mall? Sorry, just seemed trivial to me.

A fun story that COULD have been as serious as it first appeared. When you think about it you feel like she might have slugged him instead of just calling him a SOB. Good story, lad.

Just a nice little story with a happy ending. That always a nice thing.

Congratulations! Original and twisty, so that we readers had to push through to the end to see all of what was really going on. Well done!

ohio

I've missed your stories and this one was good. Thanks for writing and please post others soon.

Harry has a point, but somehow, while I was reading the story I was not bothered by the characters’ overall over the board over reaction and thoughtless behavior. I remember thinking: what a nice bubbly little vignette for a change. I guess I was not taking the plot too seriously, just enjoying the flow and the dialogue. Perhaps the fact that at core, nothing really 'happened', plus the two do love each other, which amounts to a married couple getting in over their heads into a baseless mess. This is a fertile ground for a good harmless chuckle, especially with the surprise twist at the end.

Problems with ending? I don't think so...

I'm new here, I only found Lit in April. Over the last few days I've been reading some of your stories, and I love them. Thank you.

Good on ya, mate. I didn't see it coming. Very tight plot.

Was wondering what happened to Gord's wife that went to the restroom and never returned. It undercut the wife's story but also should have been a what's up to her. Cute story, not very erotic or thought provoking but cute.

There is always trouble when one spouse cuts the other out of the communication loop. There are a whole lot of reasons, pride, anger, lust, but none of them are real justification. If you exclude your spouse you are setting yourself up for trouble. <br><br>

I like stories that hold people accountable for their actions and where the punishment fits the crime. She left him out of her plans and in response he did the same and zinged her for her behavior. Nothing really bad happened so you get a happy ending and hopefully wiser people.

Lovely story!

Tanny

that any marriage should survive the torment he put her through. Practical joke? Ha ha! I suspect that after discovering her husband has such a coarse sensibility, and sustains so little concern for her self-entrapped anxiety, that it's her turn to phone a lawyer.

To just not bother with any actions/words to her to indicate any further words are needed/wanted, by him. One thing ends and another begins. fini

The wife is going on a date with another man, she lied to her husband, and plotted with another wife. Hummmm sound like a lying slut to me. She should be lucky he didn't boot her ass anyway. Sound like maybe you have been dropped on your head to many time, Or just maybe your husband got rid of your cheating ass....hummmmm. She started it and atleast he didn't go off half cocked an divorce her ass. 5 Stars

Then rated it 1*.

Nice little short story. Communication and really listening to the other spouse prevents a lot...

Theres nothing wrong with this tale at all.

like ron said

a real well wrote story keep at this kind of thing a great shortage of twist in the tale

Loved the twist at the end.

Read a few comments from D'wornfuck, noticed it shitting all over Literotica, rated it a dumb cunt with a spiked stick up its ass.

Your story was concise and got where it was going in good time. I did think our hero put Jess through a little too much, but...

The use of the Incorrect Personal Pronoun

I can, however, find you guilty of the very common error of confusing the usage of "me" and "I". I won't go into the theory of case usage, objective case vs subjective case, but I can tell you a very simple way to use the correct pronoun. (That is if you or anyone else really cares about this.) Everyone seems to think it is very sophisticated and correct to use "I" all the time, but it is not correct. The way to tell is to look at the sentence and eliminate the other noun or pronoun and just listen to whether it sounds right or not. For example: "Jenny and I went to the store". Take out "Jenny" and you have "I went to the store." Sounds right, doesn't it? You would never say: "Me went to the store", so "I" is indeed the correct pronoun. On the other hand if you said: "Marty sold the car to Jenny and I." You would drop out the Jenny again and would be left with: "Marty sold the car to I." This is clearly incorrect and should be "Marty cold the car to me" or in the extension to the original: "Marty sold the car to Jenny and me". This is indeed the correct usage. I could tell you that you should always use "me" after a preposition, but that might be a little too technical.

Only Problem is, which is in no way your fault, that because it was only 2 pages it was clear that there has to be some kind of catch. Would the story play out as it was set up, it would have been much longer. That ruined a little my surprise but other than that good work.

I can always count on you for a good LW story.

He really put her thru the ringer for the party. Shit, I didn't like her anyway.

HA

Great story, I kept thinking where did Carla go, obviously she was in on it but surely Jess would have called her for an alibi.

She lied & publicly humiliated her husband, even though she knew his feelings about Billie. Does this relationship really have a solid future? Probably not.. I would have preferred you explored the original path; despite her intentions, doesn't she realize that she is jeopordizing her marriage? She went out of her way to deceive & stick-it to her husband. I believe there are more issues here than the text illustrates. Nicely written.

While this is funny, I know I wouldn't be amused if my spouse decided to meet a known woman chaser- especially when she KNEW his goal was getting her into bed. I also may be old fashioned, but some guy trying to cop a feel of my wife's ass on the dance floor is NOT a minor or unimportant thing. I keep my hands to myself around women, and I require the same standard from my spouse. IF my wife allowed some guy to play with her butt- I would consider that in itself to be cheating.C

The story was great the husband and wife seemed to have a troubling sense of trust or maybe they were just rolled into this as the author presented more of the manipulate wife's view of the surprise anniversary plot. Perhaps the husband really in fact had blanket trust and pummeled her emotions with his ploy at making her surprise more effective. The fact that the husband's perspective as presented was inconsistent with the ploy was troubling in drawing a clear logic to the story allowing the ambience of the wife's plan in doubt and the husband's plan not clear. It for interesting reading due this apparent flaw but in the final analysis detracted from the feel good element of the story. The reader had to endure the drama without a clear vision as to what the reality of the characters were in fact. This convolution is always troubling and waters down the climax of the story. However, the story ended well and it carried a great theme. Thanks for a great story.

They sure did embarass me in front of my posse. Only thing that made it worth it was fucking Jess the week before. That was good tight pussy. Don't believe me? I've got the pictures and I'm going to show them to Jess soon and give her a chance to buy them back--once ass fuck per picture. Then I'll send them to that asshole Harry before I leave town. But first, I'm going to get more of Carla.

Billy Coombs

I really lliked it.

and is either has been or was planning to have an affair with Billy

she comes across as a cheating slut

anybody who'd already been cheated upon by their previous spouse; would have "extreme" issues with trust (remember; it took them 2+ years to hook up), As well as; "Not without each of us first establishing what we expected out of a marriage and what each of us would do without a moment's hesitation if we didn't get it".

Excuse me; but "how does this fit into the Loving Wives category"? There needs to be a CHEATING / STUPID SPOUSE / SIGNIFICANT OTHER or WTF category added.

I'm a romantic at heart and love happy endings, but this doesn't work for me after mulling it over & over & over. Jess is supposed to be honorable and intelligent; Ha!!

Jess was proud that Harry was a fine upstanding member of the community, an Official at the Club. However; during the "minor incident" at the Club Event, while only having One Drink, she let Billy take advantage of her (bought her 3 drinks / "accidentally" rub his erection against her while dancing); Bull-Honky! Why would she dance with him (a well known Womanizer / Home-Wrecker) in the first place? ("That's a little further than Billie has ever pushed me before") WTH, she'd put up with it before; I don't believe that Harry was aware of this! Exactly "how long" did she think that it was safe to be seen with him before it would cause a scandal? What is her definition of cheating; the line she will not cross? She was humiliated? What about what she'd done to Harry at that dance, talk about humiliation? She never even thought of that! She should've immediately Publicly shut Billy down but she didn't! When Billy contacted her again "twice"; she should've informed Harry. Her actions could have lead to a catastrophic ending due to many unanticipated issues that could have arisen (including the few that were pointed out). Let's see; as was pointed out, meeting Billy at "The Horn" a Bar / Hotel with his "home crowd", yep brilliant. So what if he & his cronies didn't like the outcome of the confrontation, what if they never made it that far? Where was Jess & Carla's safety net? She apparently thought that they'd just walk-away "Scott-Free" and it would be over! OMG it could've gotten ugly!!! Would their dead or mutilated bodies ever be found? Oh yes; besides which of course, nobody knew where they was supposed to know where they were because they'd lied.

She obviously didn't consider the rumor mill (even from the first confrontation) causing embarrassment via the two Ex's, the extended families, their friends, neighbors, towns folk, etc... hmmm - which would at minimum, result in a complete loss of credibility.

I just noticed; Carla picked up Jess & Gord picked up Harry .... interesting!! Why wouldn't Harry have picked up Gord since they were supposed to be going to the party later! Harry & Jess were going to get a ride home, or to the club?? It's stated "We arrived at the club and the parking lot was full", but how?

A few readers missed something in the story; Harry overheard Jess when she was on the phone with Billy and then talked with Gord. In the meantime Jess & Carla made their plans. Harry & Gord did NOT know "the plan", only of the meeting. At that point they both thought that Carla was helping Jess cheat! They both found out about the plan after it was already in motion. These readers missed that Gord had later grilled Carla, then passed it on to Harry on their way to The Horn.

BTW; Harry heard the conversation on Thursday, he did not immediately cancel the party so he hadn't given up on her. Plus; he was still getting "all of his ducks in a row" even as he and Gord were following the "up to this point" treacherous back-stabbing, cheating wives

Of course; Carla and Gord's relationship would've been hurt badly is she were in fact helping Jess cheat. Gord was under the assumption from Friday night to sometime Saturday afternoon that this was the case, for surely he informed Harry of "the girls plan" as soon as he could to relieve his concerns. She did in fact lie, we don't know how that ended up.

Admittedly; only a card and flowers would not be acceptable, but DUH she asked for a party; planning a 10 (especially after their history), 25, or 50 year Anniversary Event would almost always include family and friends, so of course a weekend would be required since very few could attend if they had to drive more than a hour or so and then go to work on Thursday. I'm actually surprised that a "Renewing the Vows Ceremony" wasn't included to prove Harry's commitment to her. Talk about "foot in mouth" for Jess!!

Um, let's see "Mission Accomplished", so Billy was embarrassed, but at Harry's expense because now everyone thinks that she did in fact cheat on him. Sorry; but it doesn't add-up! The only way that I can see Harry "Saving Face"; would have been to walk into the Anniversary Party, telling everyone that it was off & why!! OOPs; scratch that; he should've made Jess tell everyone!!

Absolutely hilarious "Love Always, Jenny" engraved on the back!! ROFLMAO

Not sure why I did not like it, but both husband and wife seemed to want to hide the truth.

It's nice to see that the wife loves her husband and as most women are just to stubborn to admit when her husband is right about something. Nice way to put her straight and show his love for her.

Was Jess so flummoxed that she did not notice Carla had been in the ladies room for over an hour?

I loved it. I'm a romantic at heart and it made me feel good. I thought we were heading for a BTB ending to a wife that didn't really deserve it, but was pleasantly surprised by the twist.

Could have been a bit tighter. Who's to say that Carla didn't tip Jess off, and that the original intention was to fuck Billy? You could have eliminated that hole by having hubby set the whole thing up from the beginning: recruiting Billy as part of the ruse. Four stars. A fun read.

bitch who absolutely had no respect for her husband. You don't talk to someone you respect like she did, you don't treat someone you love like she did him and confronting the asshole that half the town thought she was fucking in person to try to

"shame" him is ludicrous at best. I think that the marriage is in serious trouble, just a matter of time before her desire to not let her husband "win" an argument with her by any means possible will surface again and he will have to hurt someone this time. Not worth the effort, shouldn't have to be on guard constantly in your marriage. People deserve to feel secure with the ones they love, not worried about what kind of stupid games they are constantly playing.

I guess once in a while when an alleged cheater says, "It's not what it looks like," just might be telling the truth.

even when they dont have an intentions of doing so. TK U MLJ LV NV

and I am glad I took the time to do it. Wife is still a stupid, headstrong bitch who will fuck it all up, sooner or later. I read somewhere that this type of "playing" from the wife is "all fun and games until someone has to die" and that's probably really the truth. Headstrong woman and guys in town who not only don't care who they hit on or who sees them do it. And that have a big, bragging mouth can really lead to some bad times for all concerned. It's just a matter of who gets caught doing what and who gets a really strong killing performed on them. And in real life the wife usually doesn't miss out on the retribution, just because the husband can't bring himself to hurt a woman. Seems to me that in some instances women give up that "protection" afforded by chivalry and have to take their lumps like the stupid bitches they are.

Still awful good reading. Thanks.

thank you for sharing.

this moron really wrote some stupid shit...

annony reads everyone of these stories and votes I, he is juts an old fat ugly fag!!!

Well done.

Split the difference and you have bullseye.

She admits she chose her path because she did not like that she was wrong and husband was right. While justifiably upset about billy's action at dance, husband should not have publicly berated wife. Of course wife should have limited her dancing with creep to only one dance. Actually she should not even had on dance with him. Certainly she should not have lied to husband.

Husband crossed fine line when teaching wife a lesson.

The whole episode would not have taken place, but then we would not have story to nit pick if she had acted in proper manner in first place if she had acted properly in first place.

Knowing sleaze Billy was, while agreeing to one dance and walking to dance floor she tells ol billy to keep hands in respectful place. She does so in no uncertain terms. The second his hand goes to her butt, her hand leaves a bright red imprint on his face. Slapping him so hard everyone hears.

I do not agree with females' belief they are allowed to slap males in retaliation for any comment. However, he was warned and his grabbing her butt is sexual assault and she has right to defend herself.

Too bad liberals and feminsts have convinced the public and the justice system that a husband is no longer allowed to defend the honor of his wife.

WOULD LOVE TO HAVE HAD ANDY JACKSON-ANDREW TO SOME-PRESIDENT JACKSON TO OTHERS-BEEN IN ATTENDANCE WITH WIFE AT DANCE AND HAVE BILLY PAW ANDY'S WIFE.

CHECK HISTORY BOOKS TO READ WHAT SENATOR JACKSON DID TO ANOTHER U.S. SENATOR ON FLOOR OF U.S. SENATE WHEN THE ONE MADE DISPARAGING REMARKS ABOUT OL HICKORY'S WIFE.

NOTHING LIKE A PUBLIC BEATING WITH GOOD OL HICKORY CANE TO STRAIGHTEN A SLEAZE OUT.

MEMORY MIGHT BE FAULTY BUT MY RECOLLECTION IS THE SLANDEROUS SENATOR WAS BURIED A DAY OR SO LATER

YES I KNOW ANDY'S WIFE HAD BEEN A WORKING GIRL BUT THAT WAS BEFORE SHE WAS HIS WIFE

ALWAYS ADMIRED JACKSON FOR HIS CHOICE AND HIS DEVOTION TO HER AND HIS UNFAILING DEFENSE OF HER HONOR

I was wondering if Carla was locked in the toilet. His wife never wondered where Carla was, nor claimed to her husband that she was there with her.

As written, the husband takes what he knows is an innocent prank, and scares the shit out of his wife, and why is that? To put her down? To make her beg, even though she had done nothing to deserve it?

When I, the wife and found out he had played a really cruel practical joke on me, I'd dump a water pitcher on his head, or at least want to. At a minimum, I'd give him the cold shoulder for a week.

stupid shit.

I would of just divorced her. Who need the emotional trouble that she was making.

CageyCUCK shoots off again in his bedroom closet while his three hole cum dump, "Loving Wife" soils their marital bed with another big cock "real man" so CageyCUMSLURPER can post other RAAC literary gem!

But Jess definitely deserved the "trick" that was played on her. Agreeing to meet with Mr. Horndog anywhere, any time was a truly bad idea. Especially doing it behind Harry's back....

Harry was in no way a "son of a bitch" -- Jess was a lying cunt who went down a wrong and dangerous path. Without the intervention of friends, it could have been a disaster for her marriage.

For once I am glad to see married couples push through problems in life. In this story, I the reader see only a so called horn dog named Billy, whom clearly made several attempts through flirting and other means to tempt Jess. The issue I see is not an attempt at committing adultery by Jess or the cover up by Carla which was not ever going to happen. In fact by the comments everyone assumed Jess was about to cheat. In fact Jess was only going to publicly embarrass Billy in front of his friends and the town. The true invisible villain in my mind, Billy may not be the sort of guy to accept humiliation of that level, given the recent rise of violent crimes involving guns or hot tempers, I see Billy as a man that will seek revenge. I see Billy going home, grabbing a gun and stalking out Jess and offering pay back in a deadly and unfortunate situation. The solution would be to ignore such un wanted advances and instead of accepting the drinks and pouring them into a bush, try not even toughing the glasses and leave standing. Soon guys like Billy will get the hint. If Billy became obnoxious and a potential scene was developing then Jess and simply walk away and stand with her husband, perhaps a whisper that Billy is becoming to intrusive and is bothering her. I am sure Harry can take care of little Billy. The surprise, was classic. I really enjoyed the story. 5 stars

She got herself in trouble trying that BS. Me I would at least Separation to put one big scare in her that she will not pull her BS again.

A little too much if you asked me. I would have walked out of that "party" pissed. Surprises are nice, but not when you use the heartstrings to set them up. Infidelity is not a trivial matter.

Smokepole

This story maligned me and ruined my good reputation. It will be harder to get laid now.

Billy Coombs

(aka tom anon) 5*****

Totally beleivable

How on God's green earth did the two of them think that a plan like this was a good idea? If he hadn't gotten lucky and found out about their hairbrained idea she would be facing her second divorce about now. I can think of three rocks out in my back yard that have more brains than these two women.

Well written and believable story

Great Build Up - Totally surprised by the ending Love the story

Oldegrump on SOL

Great read, Did not suspect the surprise that came.

post a comment before, but I could not see it. I do not know what I might have done wrong

Oldgrump on SOL

Don't know about Jess but I sure was surprised. Great little story.

I didn't see that coming! Well written - a really good yarn.

It's fun, but she's going to kill him later. She was wrong, but she won't see the humor in it once the party is over.

Silly story.

Was as surprised at the ending as was Jess!! She expressed her opinion of the joke with her comment," Happy Anniversary Dear.....you son of a bitch." but if she has a sense of humour, she should appreciate what Harry did to Coombs and the follow through. Great story. 5*****s.

Good story. The whole scenario only happened because the wife was arrogant, too proud to tell her husband that he was right. She compounded matters by trying to handle it herself, again not sharing with Harry.

The flip side: Gord shared with Carla. That allowed Harry to reset his plans, and demonstrate that Jess was wrong at each step of the fiasco, with their marriage intact.

You’d think Jess would have been more understanding of Harry’s anger at the golf dinner, since they each had been married to a cheater.

Again, this was a good one with some humor . Good joke, although she might not see it that way tomorow.

Good story

But agree he should have let her handle it and then dinner

Friction is evident in all human endeavor. Great story. Thanks for sharing.