All Comments on 'Happy Birthday Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great but so short

I love this series so much and this is an especially teasing chapter, but why so short?? Please continue as quickly as you can managw, I'm really on edge here. Fuck it's so sexy to read!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Suggestions

Love the series.Some thoughts=

1) I feel like we need to know more about the Best family-for example, why are there no other males? Why do they do this competition? Feel there’s a backstory here

2) do the women harbor any feelings for John? Does he have feelings for them? Thought it would be interesting for a romantic rivalry for his attention to develop between the cousins.

3) the women are all sexy and velopteus but are they dumb? It took Dani to figure out how to open the door? Is there a backstory here? Maybe they serve as “vessels” to continue the family? Or perhaps too wrapped up in the moment to think right?

4) thought we could have had more tension and build up at the party- I.e. maybe some dancing and petting before the big event- just a thought in case you get the family together again.

5) back to the question of why no other men, thought it would be interesting if John had competition-maybe a cousin fronm abroad visiting the Best brood and getting a chance with the cousins.

Anyway, great story-keep them coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love it!

This story is awesome. The chapter was short, but it was amazing and has left me begging for more. Thank you so much!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Can't Get Enough

Please. More

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good

Need to be more than one page

Drsexytime99Drsexytime99about 3 years ago

great stuff as always AdmiralSquish but I am disappointed that you decided to cut straight to the next morning. After that last scene in the previous chapter I was looking forward to seeing Aunt Christina getting that big fat cock crammed up her ass.

Coochielover71Coochielover713 months ago

Keeps getting there.

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