All Comments on 'Hard Times with Mom Ch. 04'

Keep it up.

I've enjoyed the other chapters and this one as well.

You are doing really well with this story, keep it up

A little too long. It's starting to lose my interest. Get on with it already.

Now that son is hooked, Mother can start to train and discipline son properly. Real spanking is in order if he jerks off without permission

The boy needs to start sucking that pussy,get her hot and then go down on her and suck her off giving her a multiple orgasm. After she sees how good he can make her cum, she will give up with all of the silly rules.

another fine writing job the story i hope is building to an earth shattering big o for the both of them

I like the build-up but it feels like your starting to drag just a little

You are light years ahead of the vast majority of literotica contributors. If you feel it's natural to post 6 or 7 parts then you should bloody well do so.

This has been a terrific story so far.

Loving it. More, more, more.

is starting to wane

(1/29/2022) Well, I made it through the middle of chapter 5 and I had to stop when Momma asked sonny to lick his own dick for her. This reads like a very bad two-hander play. Each chapter is a redundant scene differing only by an added Oedipus kink to each. There is no character development at all. They are ghosts haunting a motel room, IMO. Sorry, but I call them as I see them. This is a thirteen-chapter series with the last submitted in 2009 with no other story submissions by the author after, so it’s all stale anyway.