All Comments on 'Harnessing Fire Ch. 03'

very nice story, let Galea meets his match. He is a control freak that needs to be break.

Please continue. I want to knot how this plays out.

PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY...I HATE WHEN YOU GET INTO A STORY AND IT IS NOT COMPLETED. IT IS SO FRUSTRATING. HOPE YOU WILL WORK ON IT AGAIN.

I wish his slave had told him that she responded well to a small amount of kindness.

If she breaks and starts submitting to him, I'll be very disappointed. It would be even worse if she actually fell for him.

I sincerely hope she doesn't fall for any of those sadistic "Because we can" freaks.

Hopefully she's strong enough to not break and finds a way to freedom.

With it and can't wait to see how this works out. Beacuse his guys totally twisted. Yeah I know Tania is supposed to be with him in the end but I don't know how considering how controlling and disgusting he is to me. He is hot but his attitude is what's disgusting to me. I will probably end up liking him when he starts havin feelings for her. Any way please continue

This story is very promising. I'm beyond eager to read more. I can't wait to read more!!

I loved this story so far. I would really like to read more soon! Keep up the good work.

So please do.