All Comments on 'Harvey's Training Pt. 01: Prologue'

Your story is exactly what I've I have fantasied about for years.

Not sure why you thought this over-the-top violent piece of crap was worth posting but it wasn't. The only hope for this is if Harvey kills John in a most painful manner. Torture without rhyme or reason. Beyond horrible story telling.

This is exactly what I've been wanting to have happen to me.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you.

This is my fantasy. i would want m dick fucked 1st.

You're an amazing horrid amazingly wonderful writer

Please keep writing

U get inside the minds of your characters--it's a gift!

he scares me I feel so not in control..

This story is starting off great!

"After a brief pause, Harvey nodded no, and the pressure left his balls."

More and more authors are using the word "nod" incorrectly.

Moving your head up and down is a nod, and indicates "yes". Moving your head side to side is a shake, and indicates "no". So, "Harvey shook his head no...".