by curtainsup1
This story is starting off great!
"After a brief pause, Harvey nodded no, and the pressure left his balls."
More and more authors are using the word "nod" incorrectly.
Moving your head up and down is a nod, and indicates "yes". Moving your head side to side is a shake, and indicates "no". So, "Harvey shook his head no...".
You're an amazing horrid amazingly wonderful writer
Please keep writing
U get inside the minds of your characters--it's a gift!
This is exactly what I've been wanting to have happen to me.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you.
Not sure why you thought this over-the-top violent piece of crap was worth posting but it wasn't. The only hope for this is if Harvey kills John in a most painful manner. Torture without rhyme or reason. Beyond horrible story telling.
Your story is exactly what I've I have fantasied about for years.