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Click hereEveryone converged, on the Schneider household, and by 4 PM, it looked like an armed camp, with three layers of protection. Marti, Fiona, and Marianne assessed the situation. It was decided that they had overreacted, considering the circumstances. They would wait for more, substantive information, before going into lockdown.
Gary would stay on his computers, and try to break into T.E.I.'s mainframe, to see what they were hiding. Security would be doubled around Dycke and Payne; however, that would be the extent of the security upgrade, for now. Additional increases would come in stages, as information was gathered and the threat became imminent. Dycke agreed, and everyone resumed normal activity. Wait and see was the order of the day. However, everyone cleaned and oiled their personal weapons, and carried extra ammunition, just in case.
The End
Note: Chapter 13 has always been my target to end, "Having Fun with Dycke and Payne." I did not make it. I still have too many loose ends, to tie up, and a few surprises to spring. Therefore, there will be a Ch. 14., which will conclude this series.
If you have a favorite character, or couple, you would like my next series to focus on, let me know, when you VOTE. Put a note in the area provided and I will use your suggestions as my guide. Enjoy!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoAll your stories get bogged down by your obsession with abusive, bratty, violent women and men stupid enough to put up with them. You give the women bad background experiences that you seem to feel justify their totally unacceptable behavior, it does not.
Like your stories, Hate your main characters!
Hard to care what happens to such unlikable people. IMO it is a tired, easy way for you avoid having to actually create characters, you just lean back on the old familiar shorthand and give your new characters all the traits of your old characters and just stick new names on them. You can do better.
Chrissralmost 9 years agoBob and Fiona, after the wedding and maybe moving on with their own adventures.
Yeah, sometimes the "two" instead of "to" etc cause me to pause a second while reading but it is still an excellent story.
Thanks
Anonymousabout 9 years agoPlease ,get your proof reader back . Don Langston cosmosenfold @yahoo
Anonymousover 9 years agoIt's an interesting story arc, but please limit the number of commas to approximately 5% of the current total. The extreme number of commas in your story make it very difficult to read.
