All Comments on 'He Takes it for Her'

Difficult read. Neither sexy or erotic. Your writing killed the story.

everybody is a fucking critic. I thought the ideas expressed were great and I'm going to rewrite a lot of those same ideas in a story for my mistress (who is away) tonight.

writing is hard I'm not sure my writing is even as good and I work for like 4 hours on a story of that length. anybody that says that is difficult to read has a serious learning disability because I have adhd and I'm dyslexic yet I could still read it fine.