by psyche_b_mused
its suspenseful and spooky, like I scared to see what's written, what's in the portrait, who's that scary guy. I like it. Ive come to like Mary and her backbone too
Im so glad I found this story. I like that you dont use a lot of sex scenes to make the story move forward. It is very good balanced for my taste!
Cant wait to read more about Mary and Aiden! Youre a very good writer! / Beatrice, Sweden 🍁
Your first few chapters made me think that you story will just be about the romance and the action would not be well thought out but you proved me wrong! I love this puzzle that you have them solving right now and how you set this all up is fantastic too.
You've woven such an artfully engaging tale, psych_b. I've been reading for hours, and I'm suddenly reminded of huddling in my room as a teen, poring over Peirs Anthony books as the night dwindled down to dawn.
:) Wherever you are, I sure hope you're still writing. This is a really great story.
I LOVE THIS SERIES BUT OMG YOU'RE SOOOO SLOW!! NO OFFENSE ON THAT BUT I JUST KEEP SITTING ON MY THUMBS AND CHECKING AS OFTEN AS I CAN AND NOW THIS STORY IS GETTING WAY TO INTERESTING AND ITS DRIVING ME CRAZY!!! I LOVE IT!!!
Ahhhh! I can hardly stand it. I feel a compulsion to check multiple times a day to see if there is a new chapter yet. I love it. I also looking forward to your future works.
Gah! It ended too soon! I love this series of stories, you are a fabulous author. Keep up the good work and please don't wait too long to get the next one out. I'm dying to see what happens!
I am dying to know what comes next! Could you make the chapters longer? I love the mysteries within mysteries angle that has appeared, ohhhhh and KEEP THEM COMING! Love this story!