All Comments on 'Heather in the Highlands Pt. 02'

I really loved this amazing story. Brought tears to my eyes too!!

I really liked your first chapter, and you are definitely a skilled writer, but this one . . . Not only was it incredibly tragic, but the ending seemed unnecessary. Plus, the sex wasn't as good. More detail, please!

Even if Claggan is the only thing which keeps her alive, why does she have to be sealed in it alone? I could see her staying, but with James spending most of his time there, too.

I also wish you had fleshed out the background better. So Claggan is haunted . . . something to do with that lady and her maids. But what happened? Are the women the ghosts, or is there someone else? Why do the ghosts want bondage sex? And what happens next?

You definitely have the foundations of something great, here, but I think you could do even better if you fleshed it out. Even so, thank you for sharing your creativity and talent with us.