All Comments on 'Help Me, Sister'

Very well written with a good story line. Hope to read more in the near future

Very well written!!

Screams out for more story and the need to close out the cliff hanger!!

Love it !!!

Extremely well written, seething with barely submerged eroticism. I eagerly await the next chapter in this story!

Although a bit slow, it is even better with this pace. Now I have to read the next part - there should be one :)

The other part is in the queue.

I felt every moment. I saw the forest. I saw the lake. I understood very thing. Thank you.

Quite slow paced, which is perfect for a story like this, and really well done.

Great work, I look forward to reading the next chapter :)

Those names are super annoying