All Comments on 'Help Needed Ch. 01'

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

It is a really good start to the story. I think though you should take a little more time to explain their problem. I don't quite understand it. Take a little more time and develop the characters a little more. The sex is really good but add a little more suspense and depth to the characters. This is a good beginning, hope you don't mind my input.

This is one of the most unique concepts I've ever read. True it's moving a little fast and could probably do with more detail and explanation, but I like your originality and hope you continue soon with the next chapter.

I really enjoyed this story. Please keep writing!! It is def now in my top five fav's!!!!!

I for one loved this story...keep writing...its great stuff!!!

I found it interesting that by coming into these "monsters" lives, Samy has become a character in her own story. Leaves the possibility that she may not be the same person at the end that she was at the beginning, both figuratively and literally.

I think you are very original but I kind of already anticipated what was happening. Hopefully in the future chaters there will be unexpected twists.

More, please.

I really like this and can not wait for more!

I loved the first two chapters please keep writing