All Comments on 'Helping Mum Ch. 02'

For the read.

It had too many errors in it. You need to find someone to edit your stories before you publish them. You can find people on here who will help you for no charge.

Turn the damned spell checker off because it just makes things worse. It has no clue if you have used the right word in the right place.

good start but more please

There is a free spell and grammar checker called Grammerly. You can download and install it and it should help with your spelling and grammar mistakes. I think the story could be very good if you would tone down the dialogue while they are fucking. Talking about their sexual history while fucking takes away the eroticism of the sex scene.

So complete - and room for a followup! Keep cumin and am surprised none of the women squirted when being fisted!