All Comments on 'Her Eighteenth'

by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
fuck her!

NICE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Typically, for Ashson, like a Beach Boys song...fun, fun. fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not very well written.

Very unrealistic dialogue and the story as a whole was poorly executed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
She comes back for more. Great start to a series!

Have him show her all there is sexually

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Accessorize

Why take off shoes and bra? Much sexier with them on.

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