by nitegazer
Absolutely amazing story, left me wet and wanting it bad all day!!!!
Yesturday I read the story its great, it made me so horny I fucked some guy in the elevator, just thought I'd tell u lol
It was a good story - better than the 4 and higher than 4.5 so you got a 5!
exciting - and short - and to the point, so to speak.
Very Hot! I like the way you build up the tension between this lucky older man and the sexy young woman. I'll have to search your submissions for sequels.
so well done, there could be nothing that would improve on it.