by nitegazer
so well done, there could be nothing that would improve on it.
Very Hot! I like the way you build up the tension between this lucky older man and the sexy young woman. I'll have to search your submissions for sequels.
It was a good story - better than the 4 and higher than 4.5 so you got a 5!
exciting - and short - and to the point, so to speak.
Yesturday I read the story its great, it made me so horny I fucked some guy in the elevator, just thought I'd tell u lol
Absolutely amazing story, left me wet and wanting it bad all day!!!!