All Comments on 'Her Secret Text Messages'

Yet another Winterfrog Consequences tale. It is always well structured and with his inimitable style.I wish that he

had brought out the details that originally caused our hero's suspicions. It makes a less journalistic story. As always our hero has a very unemotional reaction to his loss.

Thanks for writing Winterfrog.

Always great to see a new post from you. Keep writing.

The old Winterfrog is back.............welcome,and thanks for the story!

Another excellent, well thought out story written by Winterfrog. Thank you for your story. So, what happened after your ending? Can there be a continuation to the current story? RAG

I always look for and enjoy your stories, and am seldom disappointed. My only complaint is that you don't write enough of them.

What an antidote to the other loving wife stories! Well done winterfrog carry on writing.

I look forward to your postings. There are really very few 100"s but this deserves much more than 75.

straightforwardly good story about crime and punishment. it is not convoluted, awkward, or unbelievable. <p>

i love the way he described her: compared to Robert's younger and prettier wife, he called his own ex an old kinky, sex starved narcissistic bitch who denied her husband the various sexual acts but lovingly lick and such every bodily fluid that came out of Robert... <p>

the ultimately "punishment" for both Robert and the protagonist's wife would be for the latter to marry the former's wife, a much younger, good, and pretty woman. both of them aren't into kinky sex but if they do with one another, it would be a honest exploration between man and wife. <p>

of course, a few more bitchin' phrases about now <p>

"you will truly have to live with your "darlin" Robert, or someone else who is even more beloved, but I have finally found the woman I want to spend the rest of my life with... a woman who feels the same, but the woman who DIVORCED your darlin' Roberts..." that'd be the ultimate insult the old and hopeless woman would feel and it would hurt even more than the the divorce and break up of the family. because all her hopless hopes would come to naught and he would be marrying someone younger, prettier and honest and faithful.

nothing great. different from the other LW stories in this site this week.

WF — I know you're not a native English speaker, and I admire the overall quality of your writing, but where the hell did 'none of them real bingo' come from? You used 'real bingo' twice in the story. Has someone been misleading you? That is not colloquial English. Is it a transliteration from Swedish?

Very tedious. I hope your editor works for free. Not catching ëmbracing" for embarassing early in the story was only the first of DOZENS of confusing problems.

the ass w/o a name he has no mind and so you should read everythign he said is bad.

It doesn't take a genius to figure out that "real bingo" is a term for hitting the jackpot when meeting a beautiful woman. I love the way winterfrog uses the English language.Thank you for making my 4th of July better. Luis

I mean it.... this may very well be this author's best story ever! Compare this to the new CURIOUS2C story.

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In BOTH stories the husdband sees clear acts and behavior by the wives who decided that the lovers cheating and deceptions were more important than their husbands and families.

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But in THIS story the hsuband sees what her actions / behavior / choices MEAN...

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In the wretched Curious2c story the husband has no

clue

<p>You laid out a decent foundation and then clearly defined the current problem. However, your pacing of this story was off. You wrapped up the ending too quickly. You seemed to have thrown in the other wife as an afterthought.</p>

<p>I was taken aback, expecting more story. Instead, you suddenly brought in the father in law then spoke unconvincingly of the wife saying she was sorry. Of course, there is no mention of the children. Oh, we know they had a boy and a girl (no names please). Did their lives not matter?</p><p> As in all your stories, family is virtually non-existent. Your husbands never have mothers, fathers, sisters, cousins, or anyone else we could call a relative. Your wives have few relatives too. It's no wonder that the decision making is so devoid of conflict and the outcomes are SO predictable.</p>

<p>That was the statement that made me laugh my butt off.</p>

<p>I do agree that some of the family should be flushed out. If there are kids you almost know nothing about them, if the husband has parents, mentioning them in passing a little more in depth would help the story. Most of the time its like your hearing about people that don't matter, but it might help in the understanding of the characters if, in this case the husband, you knew more about his family life. Other than they didn't like motorcycles I mean.</p>

<p>But aside from that, the humor kept me laughing, and when you got to the comment about the "local anti-prostitution committee" phone call, I started laughing my butt off.</p>

<p>Nice story</p>

-Risq

Another good fun story.<P>

I don’t know if a four-year undergraduate degree is required in your country to teach, but she is one of the most dim-witted women I have read about. <P>Thank you for the entertainment and I love the fact you write in your own vernacular when using English, it is refreshing!<P>PT

Unlike the recent Curious2c story this husband took action to expose the lie that was his marriage. By the way didn't

Ellinore plan to leave her husband?

i thought he should do an introduction at the restrauant, with his name and such, but waiting to see how it played out was better. if there was no desire to hurt anyone, she risked it, and lost.

Otherwise, I would rated it 5*****.

just saying what ever comes into her head to justify being a cheating whore and slut. he should have kicked her ass too.

I rated this a 5. And unlike DaWhorenock I find his direct action and violence against the predatory creep interfering in his marriage to be refreshing. The world needs more such men, rather than less. DaWhorenock, I've read a lot of your comments here, and I've got to ask, Are you for real? Are you really as out of touch as you sound? Are you that sheltered in life? Were you born with a coat hanger in your ear?

Seems like Scandanavian Amphibians would have significant trouble in the colder months! Anyway, most of WFrog's tales have Heroes who are strong on being straight-forward, but run significant risks (as this Hero admitted several times) of losing the data sources without changing the underlying cheating behavior or motivation! Satisfying when punching-out guys works (but it is FICTION, and it IS WFrog's word-processor!) Very unsatisfactory when the bitch (oops, Sweety) catches on to the broad hints and figures out an effective work-around, then rubs it in...the food gets shitty -or dangerous-, the home climate is Outdoor Scandanavian Winter, the nooky is dry -but only for you and you won't know, anyway! If the divorce laws are as easy as he describes, the solution is easy, but the Hero ends up looking like an asshole - not a good thing in small communities (unless you REALLY fancy Rosy Palms!)

Auto-correct didn't assist. Shame on me!

Incidentally, I agree about DWarNUT. 'For NO reason'??? An asshole works hard and screws up your life and that of your kids (and maybe Sweety) and that is NO reason???

I kinds agree that murder or even serious maiming (more than one lost testicle) is excessive and unwise (even if you have an airtight alibi)! But this was just a good, ole-fashioned ass-whupin' to settle a difference of opinion and emphasize territorial claims, even if they were then going to be relinquished!

The ending it has works alight but just seemed a tad...abrupt. Other than that nicely done.

The best part of WF's story is how he delves into the pathology of this cheating wife. She believes her líes about having only one first & last lover ( attempting to make the adultery semi-legitimate ). The talk about having ' real love ' for the husband was B.S. . You don't treat people you feel that selfless emotion for, like she did.

Yet in Winterfrog's earnest & straightforward closure scene : he makes me believe that she believed it. The author really is gifted at presenting snapshots of marriages under strain & breaking. This ability shines regardless of petty translation snafus.

I felt very empathetic with the lack of respect the husband was shown . The wrenching decision to terminate the marriage was completely understood from my vantage point.

At the time Elinore lied about the carnal things she did for Robert but not her husband ; she might well have halfway believed it herself. It would be funny, if it wasn't so sad how a person can deceive themself so completely: it was obvious to all, but her, that something was up.

The husband was right- the cheating had regressed her intelligence. As for the violence , the Romeo got what he deserved. If he endangers another marriage - maybe just maybe he will take the fistic potential of the husband into account .

bonus "anti-prostitution committee" = another WF gem! huzzah!

Winterfrog is a great writer but more than not his stories end too easily. The cheating wife is not forgiven but there is no serious revenge as such. She gets away too lightly. I wish he would correct that.

I could NOT connect with this one at all. Sorry but it just dragged on to long and the solution was not good. It just wasn't real enough, not believable enough, man you need an editor really really bad.

The absence of PIs is always a bonus - although the recording device is too easy a way of moving the story along. Other than that, okay.

As a dog returns to its vomit ... So a slut returns to her slut ways, as she will again one day.

The cultural and legal differences keep showing up -

A marriage can end so easily - just file a form and it is iver - there may be arguments about the split but it is done - no forced counseling no long stalling to drag it out - it is done - move on.

Also the sharing of the home for months afterwards is a curious effect of the - what economy, culture, value system? The idea of living with her after the confrontation is fascinating - and probably part of the how and why that so many of the stories do not look to extensive revenge or retribution - you need to live with each other after it lol.

who, while being older but not too smart, TK U MLJ LV NV

Why do your characters go to such rounds to gather evidence of their wife`s cheating?

If everything is going to be split 50/50 either way, then why do they need physical evidence? They know for sure the wife is cheating, so why not just go for the divorce immediately, when there is nothing to be gained in court with photos and video?

Perhaps you should have a better spilt of assets in favour of the husband in your stories if you are going the write about them gathering tangible proof. I know in Scandinavia everything is split 50/50, but it doesn`t have to work that way in a fictional story!

it is very obvious that English is not your native language. The dialogue is so clumsy and stilted that it makes it very difficult to read. The verbiage does not flow as it would in conversation. The words are stiff and clumsy.

It seriously detracts from your story and makes it difficult to appreciate what could otherwise be a good tale.

PLEASE get an editor.

Winterfrog, I love your stories. Your English has improved greatly over the years and it has a certain charm now that I really enjoy. I really like your protagonists--they are straight-forward, uncomplicated guys who are all male and ultimately don't take any shit.

I get a kick out of the troglodyte who trashes all you "brits". It's nice when your nastier critics self-destruct, isn't it?

Kroris666 made a reasonable comment, why bother about collecting evidence it's simpler to just get a divorce because it will be a 50/50 split anyway. So you have got your divorce and the 50/50 split, a year or so later you hear some third hand gossip, apparently your embittered ex wife had told her friends what a lousy husband you were and made other derogatory remarks, how she was glad to be rid of a worthless husband making it look like you were the reason for the divorce, how do you counter that?. I saw that exact situation occur many years ago, actually it backfired on her because a few years later her teenage children became aware of the things she was saying and having learned the truth turned against her, silly moo. No, find the evidence and get the truth out there.

In this story the wife, like all cheaters professes her love of her husband and her children. In truth, her actions have already settled that question. She doesn't love anyone. She may enjoy her life of wife, mother and slut, but there is no love involved for anyone. In fact, she doesn't really love herself. Look at how she treated herself and how she destroyed her life?

As to the reason to gather evidence, it is not for the family court's benefit. It is for family, friends and acquaintance politics. Yes, politics exist in personal relationships. Especially in divorce. When the time comes to split the blanket, the spin starts. Women are particularly good at playing the victim and spreading half truths and outright lies about their Ex. My advice is to document the truth through video and audio recordings of events and conversations. It is best to let them set themselves up with their lies, and then enter your evidence in the court of public opinion. It is best done in a matter of fact sort of way where it becomes clear to all what a stupid, evil bitch she really is after all. Women love to use their children as hostages the way the North Koreans used POW's. The torture their own children into disavowing their fathers. Yes, the kids will say anything to keep mommy from destroying their fragile psyches any more than she already has. Unfortunately, the damage done to the kids is long lasting if not permanent. The fathers are helpless to stop the torture because the courts in their infinite wisdom chose to leave the kids with the emotionally less stable parent 90% of the time. The best a divorced father can do is to continue to gather evidence in the hope that he will get the sound bite or video clip that will provide the leverage needed.

Two major reasons for evidence collection.

1 Without it the story is really quite dull.

2 It helps the wronged character remain steadfast. Without the disgusting evidence the questioning whether you should or shouldn't divorce can be agonizing, with it you just BTB.

that is how your use of a language other than your own comes across to others.

it would solve all our collective issues if you were to get an editor for whom English is their primary language, and your problems as a writer, and ours as readers will fade into the woodwork.

please.

she confessed the truth ?? by the way i read it he litrly dragged it out of her xD after evry lie

I like it when the cheater gets burned, I hate it t when I hear a cheater says but I love you and my kids. If you truly loved your partner and children, you would never had cheated.

I love it when a wannabe cuck squeals, and by the way, "the shit hit the fan!"

Don't sit back - make it as difficult as possible for the cheaters. Confront them and make them feel what they are actually doing.

WF tends to respond to his foes with physical violence during his first face-to-face meeting with the cheating male. He should be spending time in some of the State fun facilities where his father-in-law has visited.

Can't write for shit. Simply an awful tale

Are you going to finish this?

If you don't want to castrate or cut off dick then destroying nuts second or third best

The nicest thing I can say about her is that she wasn't a very good cheater. I guess that means she really did not have much practice. It's hard to stay married to someone who does that to your marriage. Good story.

Too violent? Frog rarely ever kills or crippled his antagonist. He might smack them around a little, but they deserve it. He's much too easy on the cheating wife.

This Could have been a great story, with a great proofreader/editor who speaks AND writes English. Not being an english speaking person you made it ALMOST readable, and should be congratulated for the effort. The way your 'english' come across, is quite chopped, and unfeeling.

At least he divorced her unlike some of ur other stories

Wow the CuckMaster does have one where the man behaved like a real person.

Though Im shocked I actually gave another of your stories a try. Im truly surprised as I didnt think you had one of these in you.

Damn Frog, you could have at least let him fuck Linda!

Awesome as usual. WF knows how to make a plot which various LW BTB idiots cannot come close to while regurgitating BS made by others ("February sucks" bullshit comes to mind). More importantly, his male characters are real men instead of "I dropped on my knees, cried, throw up, left in tears ... " or moralizing/sermonizing/pontificating/psychobabbling CIA/SEAL operatives.

Keep on complaining about English. Yup, you Alabama/Texas peasants don't know the only language you were born into. The Swede can chew you and your "literature" up and spit you out like a bad phlegm.

Ended to quickly for me, but I suppose there wasn't much else to say. But a good story all the same.

None of these characters were sympathetic enough to care about.

Fair, one mention of STD testing and then nothing.

Serves the Self Entitled Cunt right. She received everything she deserved.