All Comments on 'Here "Comes" The Bride'

And obviously the groom is her long lost brother... Terrible story and bad grammar. Get an editor kid.

Future hubby was aware what was happening. Dad has spoken to him and told him what he has always wanted , He thought about it and decided to let DAD have it, After it was all over Dad texted him to come in and tell daughter. Keeping daddy happy for years to come.

Its the start of a good story. I'll be waiting for the next part so see how this ends.

ignore the trolls. But I hope you plan a sequel, the end was too abrupt and unexplained.

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Luv your pic btw.

Please give us some more of this story - let us have the hubby-to-be join in on a threesome - then maybe the groom's mother - eh?

Oh I do hope there's more to come,,,this part is perfect,,a gift every bride should give her father,,so please let's have the next installment.

Love your story! Would like to see this storyline continue. Love the twist her wanting this also. This is the first of your works I have read and look forward to reading your other work.Thank you!

Got me going, but now I want to see them both use her like she deserves!!

Wasn't aware that she had a baby!

Stopped reading right there.

There must simply be more, much more. What is the next gift? He has already cum inside her unprotected pussy and probably impregnated her? Is her future husband bi and going to share her with Daddy, his lover? So many possibilities! Let's explore!

This is a good story. You need to make another. This ends on a cliff hanger. What is the news? Is Kenzi going to get pregnant? So many unanswered questions. Please think about making a sequel

please continue

Awesome

That could have happened.