All Comments on 'Here for You Ch. 01-02'

by warpedmuser

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bruce22bruce22almost 8 years ago
Some problems

But the plotline and characters look interesting

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 8 years ago
The story has potential...I am interested.

Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Aww! I loved it!

This was a wonderful story! I cannot wait to read more!

GforGrahamGforGrahamover 7 years ago
a tip

I tried using text to speech on my stories after reading about it in literotica help section. Find it very useful.

Horseman68Horseman68over 4 years ago
Serious Potential.

This story has the great potential to be a serious and rewarding read. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Readers beware this story ends in a terrible fashion. Not going to spoil the ending but it isn't what you expect or want. I really enjoyed it up until the author gave up and threw away all of the character development and ended it in a crappy fashion. This is tagged as betrayal and throughout I wondered where the betrayal was...Turns out the author betrayed the audience with the ending. Shouldn't be considered a romance. Should be under N&N or EC.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Read the unbelievable ending and don't waste your time on this nonsense.

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