All Comments on 'Hi, I'm Sam'

Simply lovely

A delightful story about suppressed longing bursting forth. Just one question that remained unanswered - how was it that Katlynn wasn't already in a relationship? Perhaps some more of her back story would have helped. A delightful read all the same. Thank you.

@Celebate1 Good question. A good story unfolds, and we learn about the character's past, present and future as we, and the other characters, get to know them. :) If I told you everything about the characters right up front, I would be gushing at you like a socially awkward speed dating newbie. lol :D

@SoleSurvivor1969 :) thank you!

Thak you for the feedback, it is a great encouragement and incentive to keep writing. Please be sure to vote!

Thanks for a entertaining read. Looking forward to future stories.

Brilliant writing, love to read stories from fellow Brits. So realistic and very erotic, such intense fucking. Loved the bit about looking into her eyes as he flooded her insides - excellent line. Please write more about these two, this could so easily develop into something very dirty. Utterly compelling and believable, thank you.

Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed it :) Yes, more to come :)

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Ta mate! The feedback and encouragement mean a lot! I'm chuffed you enjoyed it. :) Aye, more to come. :)

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However, I just could not really get into it. I think it is the cultural / language difference between America and Scotland.

but it feels like we came in mid way. I hope we get to know these people and learn how we arrived at this point in their lives.

@rightbank :) Thank you or your feedback. Knowing what you want more of helps me develop future stories :)

@Chief3Blanket Yes, perhaps so. If you're unfamiliar with Scottish dialect and such, it can be as awkward as folks from Britian trying to read a dialect from the American South :P

Very enjoyable story with a nice long build up.

Ah! I'm Sam I am ... how but a first date?