All Comments on 'Hidden Desires Discovered'

WOW, a really great story with consistent characters, a plot and wonderful sex. Keeo writing! Thanks for a good time!

You have written a great raw sex story for sure. It is well written and very arousing. Well done. Ronnie W.

But writing in moans and groans seems to spoil it. The neat part is the description of the wife's losing it to her own lust, women really do that, it seems.

The only problem is, by the end I have no idea what any of them look like, except that Jo has big breasts. Was that vagueness intentional?

While I agree that a bit more discription of the characters would have fleshed out the story and increased it's vividness, the storyline is superb! Just love the way the wife seduced her friend and husband, setting the stage for herself. Delicious! To date, my major fantasy has always been setting my wife up with other guys, but how you made me wish that I could be in his place! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter and the inevitable menage-a-trois. Richard

Hot, Hot, Hot!!

Great story. I just wish there were more character discriptions. Other than that, I loved it.

I've been reading erotic stories for over 20 years and that was one of the best. It's sad that after all these years there isn't a follow up.

I wish one of my hot friends would allow me to relive this novel.. 😣

My wife and I await developments with bated breath. She wants to see how you develop this into a realistic scenario to which she can relate. I for one can't wait for her reaction