All Comments on 'Hidden Rabbit Luck'

what part of your body is your waste? not bad for a short wham bam thank you

tale. edit better.

This doesnt seem like a romance, this is more just of a erotic couplings story, i just do not sense ANY romance per se to it. It would fit better into the EC category

Yet another writer in the Romance category who has no fucking idea what ROMANCE is, this was NOT it. And get the right WAIST.

I'll pass on the small amount of bad spelling.

I agree with the other commentators: this story belongs in Erotic Coupling [even though it was not that erotic], and not in Romance. Pleasant, but not erotic

A good read. Nice first submission. I look forward to reading more of your work.

PaulFelly

Their first coupling was doggy style and he pulls on her hair as he stuffs her mouth. Yeah, so romantic.