All Comments on 'Awake and Lost Ch. 02'

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redlion75redlion75about 10 years ago

if she can kill an elder then why can she not kill the other dick?

TarotbTarotbabout 10 years ago
Wohoo! I've been waiting for this! :D

Thank you thank you thank you! This story is shaping up very nicely; Erica is clearly a complex character and is just dominant enough to be intriguing, without spilling over into being tacky. I can't wait to find out what happens when Harper realises 'Dream Girl' is very, very real, and what she actually is.

As has been mentioned though; it is a little... odd that Erica could kill an elder with apparent ease. If nothing else, shouldn't she get more than an apparent slap on the wrist from Riley?

Either way I want to read more, please?

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