by NYCSeparatedWM50
This may just be personal preference, but I like a bit less story and a lot more focus and detail to the "action". This felt a tad unbalanced- but it was certainly worth the read! I'd love to see a sequel.
It's always nice to read a story that's different. I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did, but the ending was good. I tried to vote a 5, but there must be a glitch in the system as voting isn't working. Glad I caught the story in the New Story list. Great writing!
Enjoyed the twists, the way it unfolded, as if the author was confiding in me. And, it left me hot and bothered...the way a good story should!
I too lived in NYC . I used to work nights and during down time my favorite thing to do was to check out what the locals were up too. I have seen many couples fucking and more than a few women putting their whole bodies on display knowing damm well i was looking.