All Comments on 'High School After-Party'

by Alex_Ho

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story

Very realistic story. Many have had first experience in a similar fashion at band camp or overnights.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Keep it going expand their relationship

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Beautiful work, especially since I'm a drummer myself. Although I am the most virgin u can possibly get :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Why did you switch from third person in the first paragraph to first person in the second? That should be consistent through the whole story.

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