by TrainedPen
This guy is a psychopath. Maddie's going to be sorry she left the convent.
I stopped there, when are you so called 'writers' going to stop insisting on 10 inch dicks? Also, cheating isn't ROMANTIC!!!
Plain and simple. There's no romance here.
This ho I used to date joined a convent so I fucked another ho. Got her pregnant then she got fat and ruined my life. First ho came back and thankfully the second ho and the brat died. Now I can fuck the first ho again.
So fucking romantic. So badly written.
Wow! Just Wow! Stick to reading and leave the writing to others.
I have been on Lit for over 10 years and I have not yet read anything worse than this! Hope you never ever write anything again...
Common guys, besides the death if the child it is a hot story.
And this is a site where it is all about fantasy. I love wife humiliation and hit evil homewreckers. So pls keep up the great work! Thx