All Comments on 'His'

by Apryllrain

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Mmmm- very hot

I like the speed of the story and the excellent use of description. The sex was hot too- thanks for sharing!

JeffLeighJeffLeighover 13 years ago
A little short

This was good, I gave it a 3/5 because it was a little too short for my tastes. Overall good job though!

traci_eliottraci_eliotover 13 years ago
Very fiery - I wish it had been longer

Oh my - that sounds a little like a rude joke!

Nicely written - thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is sooooooo hot… I can’t… it’s so hot I wanna cry…

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