All Comments on 'His Beautiful Neighbour Ch. 02'

More good work, keep it coming! Looking forward to seeing how he gets mom out of the way.

Keep it on.

I especially like the feelings you put in. Not just pure humilation and domination, but the growing of true love.

Can't wait to read the next part.

can't wait for next part to see how he gets by mom,and to read what happens out in public!!!!

Waiting for part three, and thanks for the support

As usual a good job <3

This one ended a little too soon for my liking but never-the-less it was at an appropriate moment in the story. Sometimes you just got go where the stry takes you. Quickly becoming one of my favourite titles.

I apologize, I can't help but judge that you have the most creative imagination that I've come across on Literotica in a very long while, as well as having the ability to express it. This is a wonderful story, and I'm glad to have found you.

Judging Most Positively!

I got to say that I really like this series so far! And I am only on chapter 2. This series is just so good, it's fun to read, entertaining and the characters are great. Keep up the great work.

in fact, hot, but you should ask for some help with your grammar and spelling. Some misspellings can be hilarious, but most are real turn-offs. For example

"...making no illusion as to what merchandise she was talking about..."

The word you want is 'allusion,' from the verb 'allude.' But even if you replaced your wrong word with the right word wouldn't make this passage more intelligible. Maybe: 'without alluding to'—or just starting over.

This just ONE example of where you fuck up.

Keep on trying!