All Comments on 'His Best Friend & Her Sisters'

WTF?? Some how an edit and re edit before posting this would of helped it a lot.

Dear Anonymous

Where do you think is Pakistan? Is it not part of Asia? Or is your all-American-only wisdom placing that country elsewhere in this world?

Dear Anon,

Pakistan is in South Asia.

To Anon -- methinks thou hast 'fapped' overmuch; dost hair grow on thy palms? Mayhaps that be why thou hast a lacking in thoughtful queries.

Really dude, if you found this site, you do internet -- there's this thing called "Google", and another called "Wikipedia"; either of which would have cleared up any questions or concerns regarding mistaken geography concepts.

For everybody else: yes, I occasionally feed trolls -- it can be fun.

To cybersky: voted 5...

How lucky is Tim to find these lovely women! I am looking forward to your next in this series. I do not understand why all these other comments are arguing about whether Pakistan is in Asia. It is. Move on. Norah seems like a special person to share this way. I like these guys.

It is a minor point in the grand scheme of things but I think you wrote "Tim" too much. You could have easily said "he" a lot more and the whole story would have felt more organic.

This was a good story but the punctuation and obvious typos were distracting. You have good ideas but you need to proof read your work or find a good proof reader to help you.

Love how you distributed all the joy juices ...

Plenty for everyone!

If the sisters would like to expand their options?

They know where to find me!