All Comments on 'His Best Friend & Her Sisters'

by cybersky

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KingCuddleKingCuddleover 1 year ago

Love how you distributed all the joy juices ...

Plenty for everyone!

If the sisters would like to expand their options?

They know where to find me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story line but.

This was a good story but the punctuation and obvious typos were distracting. You have good ideas but you need to proof read your work or find a good proof reader to help you.

GingerCat1GingerCat1about 8 years ago
Something that annoyed me a bit

It is a minor point in the grand scheme of things but I think you wrote "Tim" too much. You could have easily said "he" a lot more and the whole story would have felt more organic.

grabmyballsgrabmyballsabout 8 years ago
I Enjoyed Your Story

How lucky is Tim to find these lovely women! I am looking forward to your next in this series. I do not understand why all these other comments are arguing about whether Pakistan is in Asia. It is. Move on. Norah seems like a special person to share this way. I like these guys.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
RE: "Asia / Pakistan ???"

To Anon -- methinks thou hast 'fapped' overmuch; dost hair grow on thy palms? Mayhaps that be why thou hast a lacking in thoughtful queries.

Really dude, if you found this site, you do internet -- there's this thing called "Google", and another called "Wikipedia"; either of which would have cleared up any questions or concerns regarding mistaken geography concepts.

For everybody else: yes, I occasionally feed trolls -- it can be fun.

To cybersky: voted 5...

cyberskycyberskyabout 8 years agoAuthor
Location

Dear Anon,

Pakistan is in South Asia.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Stupid Anon

Dear Anonymous

Where do you think is Pakistan? Is it not part of Asia? Or is your all-American-only wisdom placing that country elsewhere in this world?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Asia / Pakistan ???

WTF?? Some how an edit and re edit before posting this would of helped it a lot.

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