by cybersky
Love how you distributed all the joy juices ...
Plenty for everyone!
If the sisters would like to expand their options?
They know where to find me!
This was a good story but the punctuation and obvious typos were distracting. You have good ideas but you need to proof read your work or find a good proof reader to help you.
It is a minor point in the grand scheme of things but I think you wrote "Tim" too much. You could have easily said "he" a lot more and the whole story would have felt more organic.
How lucky is Tim to find these lovely women! I am looking forward to your next in this series. I do not understand why all these other comments are arguing about whether Pakistan is in Asia. It is. Move on. Norah seems like a special person to share this way. I like these guys.
To Anon -- methinks thou hast 'fapped' overmuch; dost hair grow on thy palms? Mayhaps that be why thou hast a lacking in thoughtful queries.
Really dude, if you found this site, you do internet -- there's this thing called "Google", and another called "Wikipedia"; either of which would have cleared up any questions or concerns regarding mistaken geography concepts.
For everybody else: yes, I occasionally feed trolls -- it can be fun.
To cybersky: voted 5...
Dear Anonymous
Where do you think is Pakistan? Is it not part of Asia? Or is your all-American-only wisdom placing that country elsewhere in this world?
WTF?? Some how an edit and re edit before posting this would of helped it a lot.