by loveinthetimeof
You have a gift for descriptive sex. One can feel everything as you describe it. I suspect you are ESL, probably from India. You need to get an editor because you have several word usage errors. They detract from a story.
Short length provides too little information and despite the previous commentator I thought the descriptions weren't even good enough for a "stroke" story. This felt like "part" of a story and the rest of the story is missing.
W.T.F. this is gay or fetish or just dogg shit but no L.W. Puke.
like your style and I enjoyed it. you do a great job of painting a picture with words and I especially enjoyed how you showed the conflicting emotions of the cuckold husband.
I hope you'll decide to ignore the trolls. the “loving wives” section is full of them. of course most post anonymously because its easier to spread hatred and show off one's ignorance while in disguise.
Thanks for sharing. I hope to see more of your work in the future.