All Comments on 'His Good Girl Pt. 01'

I for one would love to read part two! This was totally hot and I can see it turning into a much longer story. 5 Stars. ~K.

I hope you keep going with this story!

You've ruined other men for me now, thanks.

I think you have the knack! Well done

very hot. i love your writing style and how

you started the story by building the characters!!! continue please! im already addicted!! <3 <3 <3

Would love to read the next part :)

please this story is much better than some garbage on this page and especially in this category. more pls <3

Wow! I never expected to get such a great response on my first submission! Thanks so much everyone for your comments and faves :-) I will get to work on part 2 and would love to hear if you would like the story to go in a particular direction...

Please continue. This was great, even more so being your first. Now that your literary virginity has been taken, you won't be so nervous.

please let that happen to me one day, and soon!

why don't you continue? :(

please write more. this is so good.

We loved it...both of us read it and we both greatly enjoyed it. Loved your style and detail and the emotions you folded so well into a very quick read. Thank you.

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/664086/4/confidential-meeting-daragon-gdragon-kwonjiyong-sandarapark-nyongdal

You might wanna read this, the sex scene is exactly the same.

Please continue the story. Very Hot!

The Asian Fanfics story was published a month after yours... Sucks to see plagiarism on a sex story of all things!!

Hot though!