by That70sGuy
The protagonist or the author of that crap, who one is the sick one???
Once again, why isn't this in FETISH! He pisses in her mouth, the story goes into FETISH. Just an awful attempt at story telling AND you put it in the wrong category.
No stars
I know women that would have squirted all over the wall to be treated like this
This probably was more appropriate in BDSM, though it does deal with a husband and wife relationship. However, those that feel that I am racist, should google 'husband films wife with black bull'. For those that feel this is sick, google amateur fisting, and scat and pissing videos. Don't shoot the messenger. Abasement and abuse of women, and the women who get turned on by it are much older than I am.
And thought it was garbage. First of all, no real woman would want this done to her irregardless of what puppydom says. A true sick bdsm perverted woman might. Again, this seems to have been written by a woman, unless this guy is just this sick. If he is see a psychiatrist, please.
This crossed the line into BDSM and FETISH so far that you can't see Loving Wives from there. If your story has scat in it, please don't publish it here. It will get a low score. Since you asked for it: 1*