All Comments on 'His Pet Ch. 03'

You've written in 3rd person with a slant towards her. You've then made her blindly accepting. Her emotions are fleeting and glancing, little we can grasp. He is a driving force with a minimal presence. I get little feel for them as individuals or as a couple. I feel puzzled by her and indifferent, almost cold toward him.

The facts are clearly presented. I'm floundering with they why of them both. They exude the aura of 'because.' That works sometimes, but is insufficient here.

Love this story so fucking much!! Would love to have someone make me their pet. I came 3 times while reading this story so perfect

I love this story, and how he's so gentle yet demanding. How she's so eager to please, and loving it. They have an enviable dynamic! Thanks for writing, and I hope there's morrrrre!