All Comments on 'His Return'

by DreamWeaverAz

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Shadow_KyssShadow_Kyssover 18 years ago
Mmmmm

Much better ending, the strength, devotion and desire of each character apparent. kysses

Shadow_KyssShadow_Kyssover 18 years ago
Smiles

Still reminds me of Your first little one. It is how she would react and I can hear her pleas with You...

kysses

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
yummy

nicely done. i could see myself in this. thank you!

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