by Abdulbenthere
I'm into couple stories at the moment and I love the warmth between these two. The word 'cunt' startled me. I use it myself sometimes but amongst the love and warmth it was shocking...and strangely delicious.
I'm not 100% sure about the title, though - it made me think that there was going to be another surprise towards the end.
Lexy xxxx
I liked it a lot Abdul. Her gift of trust is a very special thing, and you showed how much it was cherished by him. That makes me want to go "Awwww". *smiles* And I loved the twist at the end, him not giving back control as she expects. That was very sexy.
The only real constructive criticism I have is to get edited for punctuation & sentence structure before submitting.
Long term tie up sessions are the best of the best. Leave me completely spent, drained and tortured and ready for the next round.
Ticklishsoles
If I was him I’d be planning to stretch those limits
Tess (UK)