All Comments on 'His Wife Surprised Him Again'

by Abdulbenthere

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LexyHarperLexyHarperover 13 years ago
Warm story.

I'm into couple stories at the moment and I love the warmth between these two. The word 'cunt' startled me. I use it myself sometimes but amongst the love and warmth it was shocking...and strangely delicious.

I'm not 100% sure about the title, though - it made me think that there was going to be another surprise towards the end.

Lexy xxxx

MissKay77MissKay77over 13 years ago
Not bad

I liked it. It is warm but still has the BDSM measure. Is good.

girlownedgirlownedabout 13 years ago
Very nice

I liked it a lot Abdul. Her gift of trust is a very special thing, and you showed how much it was cherished by him. That makes me want to go "Awwww". *smiles* And I loved the twist at the end, him not giving back control as she expects. That was very sexy.

The only real constructive criticism I have is to get edited for punctuation & sentence structure before submitting.

ticklishsolesticklishsolesover 6 years ago
Mmmmmmm!

Long term tie up sessions are the best of the best. Leave me completely spent, drained and tortured and ready for the next round.

Ticklishsoles

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sweet and Romantic

If I was him I’d be planning to stretch those limits

Tess (UK)

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