All Comments on 'Hit Men Need Love Too'

I think that you have the romantic concept all fucked up. I don't think that you have gotten it but if you keep trying you might be able to grab onto it. And its a shame b/c I was feeling you all the way up to the cousin Vinny part. I honestly wish someone could tell me where in the hell that came from, b/c for me it came right out of far left field. Next time when you write another love story build it up a little bit more so it won't be such a curve ball in your story.